Last time – I said that things were busy, and they have continued in that vein. We’ve had some short times away and school activities which have occasionally been disruptive, but dropping planned work on Song was a good decision.
|Write every day||2/2||2/2||2/2||–||–||–||–||–|
|Run Hood To Coast||4/4||3/4||3/4||–||–||–||–||–|
Shapes is the only fiction I have worked on this period, and I’ve made consistent progress on that. At this point I am expecting to continue on that book until the second draft is done before picking up Song again.
1. Finish Song
- Read second draft – read for readability and typoes.
Last action: read the draft.
Working on the Shapes so I haven’t picked this up yet.
- Apply corrections from draft read. Pending completion of step (1)
- Give it to my wife to read Pending completion of earlier steps, and depending on her interest.
- Revise that second draft Pending completion of earlier steps.
- Polish the draft Pending completion of earlier steps.
- Make submission materials – synopsis, pitch, hook, and all of that.
There were no Ostara goals for this project.
Goals for next update: including these goals as placeholders for when I come back to this book. Still no metrics for Song this time though.
With that in mind, these are the things I will work on next if I come back to Song, but I’m not going to define metrics this time.
- review and typo edit second draft manuscript.
- identify any significant issues with the story.
- hand it off for first read feedback from my first reader.
2. Complete Shapes
- complete detailed outline – done!
- play with some ideas in the outline
- complete outline
- second draft
Goal from Ostara was:
- try out some of the ideas I have for variations in the premise – achieved. The new premises are interesting and make the right promises to the reader early on.
- fill out the outline around the end of the story – no work specifically on this, although there has been a lot of outlining and background writing to flesh out other story components.
- have a completed outline, preferably re-combined with text – as I mentioned last time, this was never a realistic goal and it was not achieved.
Total: I’ve finished off the list of questions that need to be resolved and continue to work through the hotspots and other issues. This is a yellow since only the first one of these metrics was really achieved, but I feel like I have a stronger story to start working on in earnest around mid-summer.
Goals for next update: finish the outline –
- finish the high-level plotting.
- populate detailed outline.
- re-combined outline with text.
Metric: Yellow for one or two of these, green for all three. The first two will be in the text format, while the third should see me going back to Scrivener*. At this point I am expecting to go from outline to drafting without pause.
3. Write every day
Make words or something every day.
I’m pleased both that the writing log has been maintained and that it is useful.
The amount of not-writing this period has gone up because of a couple of necessary weekends away and some day job interference. Despite that, I wrote on 32/40 days in this period which is 80%.
I’m a little disappointed with this rate, but I am still calling this a green because I logged honestly, made actual progress on all projects, and did in fact make words on more days than just the work week.
Goals for next update: the metrics for this goal worked the last two periods, so keeping those the same – keep a log, and make sure that I actually put fingers to keyboard. I will call this green if I write more than five of seven days on average (72%).
4. Run Hood To Coast
The plan for my racing this year:
- Shamrock Half Marathon, 15-Mar-2015 – completed!
- Hood to Coast, 28-Aug-2015
- lose weight – failed. I am up if anything, but I have also stopped weighing because I know I will not like what I see.
- start cycling again – achieved, but later in the period than it should have been. I’ve been back on the bike for only a week.
- stay on the 10,000 steps a day – achieved, although again late in the period. The lateness of making these goals may be connected to the failure of the first goal.
- continue uninjured – achieved. There are niggles, but nothing persistent.
Total: 3/4 – yellow.
Goals for next update: Hood to Coast beckons, if we actually have a team.
- lose weight – lose five pounds, because good… grief.
- cycle more often than not – the week I’ve ridden so far has helped a lot. Keep it up.
- stay on the 10,000 steps a day.
- continue uninjured.
Metric: yellow for 2-3, green for 4
A New Dawn started a couple of weeks ago and it was epic. The second episode went well too – I like this story, and I Like exploring it with my friends.
[*] it may seem strange that I am working on an outline in text files when I am such an avowed enthusiast for Scrivener, but the detailed outlining I am doing requires line-by-line positioning which is harder for me to manage in the more user-friendly tool.