That took longer than I expected, but I have finally finished working through the punch list comments. All the remaining remarks (the ones with wider scope) are pulled into the third pass edit file.
I’m pretty happy with the consistency of the story, now. What the PLR exposed were niggling things like visual intrusions when the MC is wearing earplugs and other timing issues. There are also a few notes to say that whole scenes need to be rewritten or removed, mostly where I have written things that are just too silly, but definitely closing in on having this draft done soon.
Draft complete this quarter? Possible but unlikely, especially given that I have another story due in a month. The real goal is to finish the draft before November.